 Unknown Enemy: Chapter 18, Almost there... |
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 Jan 27 2003, 02:49 AM
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 Unknown Enemy  Group: Playtester Posts: 2,564 Joined: 25-January 02 From: US Member No.: 25  |
The end is really in sight... I'm serious...
Well anyway, here's the first Nothing chapter, thanks to Ken for letting me use his map. Great place for what happens. Let me know what you think. http://wayward.netfirms.com/ue/ue.html -------------------- -Rob
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Jan 28 2003, 06:19 PM
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Foul Beast  Group: Members Posts: 110 Joined: 10-January 03 Member No.: 12,104 |
All right!!!!!!!!!!!
Finally, another chapter of the Unknown Enemy. By the way, I sometimes have trouble downloading your stories. Can you check it out and see if it is just me (I use Internet Explorer).  Rob, you are a forum moderator... Whoa!!! I just notice!!! Holy Cow!!! (too much Clearly Canadian Drinks) Please stop doing multiple posts in a row. This post has been edited by Nemesis Zero: Jan 30 2003, 09:29 PM -------------------- I am hungry. Go Canadian Sandwich!!!
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Feb 1 2003, 11:31 AM
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 Dark Queen Group: Members Posts: 631 Joined: 30-July 02 From: Montreal, Canada Member No.: 1,029 |
good one!
-------------------- Llama Killer, spraying and praying since 2002!
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Feb 1 2003, 11:13 PM
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 Dark Sire  Group: Constellation Posts: 4,423 Joined: 25-April 02 From: Virginia, USA Member No.: 513 |
***SPOILER***
well done indeed. I somehow get the feeling that stone is still alive though. This post has been edited by rob6264: Feb 2 2003, 07:37 PM -------------------- QUOTE Sanity is just a weird form of madness. |
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Feb 2 2003, 05:59 PM
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 Dark Sire Group: Members Posts: 5,795 Joined: 24-November 02 Member No.: 9,807 |
EDIT: Thanks for fixing that spoiler
This post has been edited by xect: Feb 12 2003, 02:12 AM -------------------- Xect
This is my hive. There are many like it, but this one is MINE. |
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Feb 2 2003, 07:38 PM
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Unknown Enemy Group: Playtester Posts: 2,564 Joined: 25-January 02 From: US Member No.: 25 |
Thanks all. Any crits?
-------------------- -Rob
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Feb 4 2003, 01:28 AM
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Dark Sire Group: Constellation Posts: 4,423 Joined: 25-April 02 From: Virginia, USA Member No.: 513 |
in crits... I really feel the bend towards mystic happenings isn't helping too much. I did prefer the earlier chapters in this regard.
-------------------- QUOTE Sanity is just a weird form of madness. |
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Feb 5 2003, 04:53 PM
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Unknown Enemy Group: Playtester Posts: 2,564 Joined: 25-January 02 From: US Member No.: 25 |
Yeah, most people seem to
-------------------- -Rob
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Feb 5 2003, 11:10 PM
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 Beast Group: Members Posts: 77 Joined: 5-February 03 Member No.: 13,159 |
great work! want more! dont end it!
but i didnt get the gypsy part... think im too tired, but could anyone explain me, why the cutted the wires and killed the gypsy?! btw: just subscripted to post in this thread
This post has been edited by Specter: Feb 5 2003, 11:11 PM --------------------  This is my hive. There are many like it, but this one is MINE!
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 Feb 8 2003, 10:50 PM
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 Drone Group: Members Posts: 19 Joined: 18-January 03 Member No.: 12,425 |
OMG GOD PLEASE NOOOOOO! I WAS LIKE HALFWAY THRU AND I HAD TO RESTART MY COMP AND NOW THE SITE ISNT WORKING GAHHHHH! /me shoots himself in suspense
-------------------- Dude.....those chicks from that band hansen are HOT!
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Feb 12 2003, 02:14 AM
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Dark Sire Group: Members Posts: 5,795 Joined: 24-November 02 Member No.: 9,807 |
Thats the horror of continued stories, all the things no one tells(though i have my suspicions, but 'nuff 'bout that). We'll just have to arrive at rob's hopuse with mólotov cocktails and force him to finish today. anyways, good work. -------------------- Xect
This is my hive. There are many like it, but this one is MINE. |
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Feb 13 2003, 02:08 AM
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Drone Group: Members Posts: 42 Joined: 7-January 03 Member No.: 11,969 |
*Bows donw to the pur greatness of it*. That is the best story i have ever read (i kid you not) I laughed. I cried. My heart began pumping as i gripped my mouse in antcipation. WOW! You seriously need like publish it or something. And are you a writer, cuse if you arent you sure as heck would be a popular one.
-------------------- -[ttg]- Rubber Ducky is my game name
TTG is recruiting! www.theterriblegorges.org.uk |
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Feb 15 2003, 08:17 PM
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Unknown Enemy Group: Playtester Posts: 2,564 Joined: 25-January 02 From: US Member No.: 25 |
Naw, I'm not a writer, this is the first story I've actually stuck with. Thanks though.
-------------------- -Rob
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Feb 16 2003, 02:19 PM
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Beast Group: Members Posts: 77 Joined: 5-February 03 Member No.: 13,159 |
what about the next episode?
-------------------- This is my hive. There are many like it, but this one is MINE!
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